【雅思备考】再谈雅思写作跑题，通过一个实际的例子看看跑题是怎么出现的？

Q: 再谈雅思写作中的跑题，通过一个实际的例子看看跑题是怎么出现的？接上一篇NO.4

A:

雅思写作题目中，有如下几类问题：

• 提出自己的观点— present your ideas about a topic
• 评价他人观点— evaluate an idea about a topic
• 提出解决办法—propose one or more solutions to a problem
• 评价解决办法—evaluate one or more solutions to a problem

上一篇中，举了如下的例子：

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

本题实质是一个solution，即，高中毕业到升入大学，有不同的solution—直升或者Gap year。 本题要求对Gap year做利弊分析。

某个同学的开头段：

在一些国家，年轻人常常会在高中与大学之交选择花一年的时间来旅游和工作，而不是直接升学，这被称为间隔年。但是不同的国家，不同的人之间对于间隔年的看法大相径庭，比如在欧美国家间年是很流行的做法，但在亚洲国家，这样的行为却显得不可理喻。那么是什么原因导致不同的看法?间隔年又有哪些优点和缺点呢?

该同学显然把题目理解成了他人观点，接下来的主体段论述很容易继续跑题。

除了在审题时容易理解错误，在论述时，也有同学无意中犯类似的跑题的错误。

比如，一个同学的两个主体段是这样的：

Some people believe that there are many advantages for students to spend a year working or traveling after graduation from high school. Firstly, this can expand students' vision….

Others think that graduate students spend a year of time to go to work or travel has many also disadvantages. Firstly, fresh graduates are not experienced enough in the society. It is inevitable for them to encounter some dangers and thorny problems. They may go astray when it is difficult to distinguish the good from the bad….

该同学把本问题写成了另外一种题型：Discuss both views and give your own reasons.

现在看另一个例子：

As water is a valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

开头段：

It is universally acknowledged that water has been considered as one of the most valuable resources on earth. …

主体段一：

Nowadays, the consumption of water tends to soar due to the growing population and the increasing demand in agriculture and industry. Consequently, …

主体段二：

However, some people object to the intervention from government and believe citizens have the right to use water as they want. In general, the main concern is that the limitation of water use may lower the living standard and cause inconveniences in daily lives. In other words, …

从论述上，主体段二有什么问题？

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